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From the Victims Point of View Ch. 3

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     Evil does not simply live. Evil is death.
     My name's Melina Luckerman. And this is my story.



     I had the perfect life. The perfect family. The perfect story. I lived in Crowley, Texas. I had my loving husband, Ricky Luckerman. We had 4 kids. A 7 year old, Zachariah. A 2 year old, Tyler. A 4 year old, Jane. And a 6 month year old, Ainslee. We also have a 3 week old puppie great dane named Sparky. We went to church every Sunday morning with the kids. We ate out at least once a week. We gave the kids practically anything they could ask for. What a wonderful life we had all lived. That is until Ricky went off the deep end.
     One night I had made a lovely roast for all of us to eat for dinner. Roast was Ricky's favorite food. I first noticed something was off when he came home and wasn't completely thrilled with anything really, let alone the food. He didn't even say goodbye to the kids. He just kissed me hello and sat down. Like he was in a daze or he was lifeless. He ate slowly but surely and when he finished he went straight to the master bedroom. After the kids all finished eating and I finished feeding Ainslee I put them all to bed. I went to Ricky's and mine bedroom. He was kneeling by the bed praying.
     I called out his name. He didn't reply. He told me he wanted to make it an early night. I agreed with him and went to bed. I woke up with duct tape over my mouth and tied to the bed. I mumbled a whimper and squeal as I saw Ricky standing above me with one of those large silent chainsaws. What in the world was he doing? I saw our bedroom door crack open but I wasn't able to see who it was because I felt a sharp pain in between my legs. I think Ricky's cutting through me. I could feel blood pouring out of me. I could feel myself splitting in half. I could feel death and it's painful slap in the face. Now I could watch Ricky kill my family from heaven. I don't believe he is a monster, but I do believe he's just off his path from God.


     I love my mommy and daddy.
     My name is Zachariah and this is my story.


     I've always loved my mommy and daddy. Well, that is until daddy killed me. That was pretty mean.
     One night I was awoken by daddy. He told me I stunk and had to go take a bath. I said okay and just went into the bathroom. I laid down in the bathtub and set the water to the hottest I could stand. I put my head under the water and came back up for air. My vision was blurry but I could see daddy with something shiny in his hands. He threw it at me. It hit me before the electrocution. I died instantly.


     Where's my mommy?
     My name's Ainslee and this is my story.


     I know everyone is thinking she's a baby she can't think. Well, yeah I can. I can even think while I started crying and my daddy just pulled a pillow over my face until I suffocated to death. All I wanted was my mommy.



     Ouch, daddy! That hurts!
     My name is Jane and this is my story.


     All I wanted was a kiss night night. But no. Daddy lead me into the living room where he had this metal stuff called... Barbwire? He told me it was a princess tiara and he had to put it on my head because I was a princess. As he began to slowly wrap it around my head it began to stab into me. The wire sank into and through my skin causing it to bleed. I told my daddy to stop, I pleaded, begged him. He didn't listen. He looked me in the eye as he squeezed tighter and tighter.


     Daddy, what're you doing?
     My name is Tyler and this is my story.


     I saw my mommy and Sparky before I died. I walked in on daddy while he killed both of them. He had a chainsaw and was slicing mommy in half like she was a piece of wood. It was bad. I watched in horror and quickly closed the door. I tried sleeping after that. But I woke up to daddy making noise in the kitchen. I heard the whimpering of Sparky while my dad put it foot on sparky's head keeping him under water to drown.
     Later that night daddy came into my bedroom and slit my throat. All I could think was why daddy? Why did you do that?
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DeathdayGirl's avatar
Wow....and I thought I was dark...